Well, i can not find any mistake in it, to me it is a perfect poem, and if you turn this in, u should be able to get an A
it was a great poem, 5/5

This was really good.. I dont think there is anything I can say to make it better.. The flow worked well and your descriptions were great.. I also loved the metaphoric ideas you put into it.. Very nicely done! 5/5

Your use of description is really good. The idea of the poem is different and i like it. Keep up the good work. =]

Making the idea of a family tree literal worked well in this poem. I like how you tried to use creative words, maybe slightly destracting from the message in places, but it's better to be creative than produce the same as everyone else.
I liked how near to the end you showed how family give unconditional love and lift you back up when you fall.
Thanks for sharing.

This poems imagery was very detailed which is good, but here it seemed it was a little too much.. it did not leave much to wonder, but the overall poem was very beautiful and sad. and the metaphor/simile of the tree as a family tree and whatnot was very nice.

over all i could find no grammar/ spelling problems.
or visisble mistakes

5/5

x.x:Lauren

Such a beautiful poem hun Wonderful writing =] 5/5

Hi. i was just wondering, you commented on one of my poems -paper wings- a while back. saying i needed to add more of an impact for the ending. i recently added 2 more stanzas(today actually and i was wondering if you could read it and tell me if you think it workd better. if you do it is much much appreciated. =]

x.x:Lauren

Very well penned peice of work!!...Filled with clear imagery supprted by good choice of words...sad yet beautiful!
xxPoojaxx

I really enjoyed this! The title got me very interested, and I never lost interest after that! The title of a poem is important to me ~ I believe you nailed this one!

I really enjoyed this poem ~ the topic and the way in which you wrote it. Great Job!