I really liked the selection of your words, they way u expressed ur feelings is really remarkable, keep them coming

all the best and take care

This is a touching free verse poem with a very havenly flow .....great work

This poem is so amazing, it almost made me change my perspective in life, i say almost because i am horrible and have a heart of stone! Plus it moved me twice!

This is a prime example of art, you truly have a gift with words.
This poem was sweet, dark, and almost tempting. It was so gentle and yet incredibly powerful. It was Like getting killed with a flower.

Wonderful poem from a wonderful writer, 5/5

And thank you so much for your comments on my work

Wow great piece I like it also

and specially this line

when your toxic lips met mine...

your great in choosing that words great job

Geneross

Excellent wordplay!! Very well done!

This poem was so great, so nicely written and full of deep feelings, great job once again and 5/5 from me.

Very good

This subject is the curse of all poets! It seems they all must write about it! NEW MATERIAL

Now that ive said the mean part, at least you had a unique way of saying it, congrats.

Wow- i liked this alot...you picked great words for this poem, powerful ones-which i think added to it...as i read it, it sounds in my head like there are several hidden meanings..am i totally off here?

great writting skills

october xx

You did a great job with this poem. Beautifully written and a good use of words. Overall great job. Keep it up. =]

Beautiful use of language- I really enjoyed it- 5/5

Very nice job! I loved your word choice and descriptions. You could still work on the flow.

Very nicely written

I thought this poem was good. It was written slightly diffrent then most I read, and that is good. Shows you are creative and unique. Keep up the great work.

Very creative. Loved the choice of words. 5/5

This was really sad. Nicely done though. It was different to most love poems I read, and that's a good thing. I liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Amazing job. this is really sad because it's a broken of love poem but i love how you wrote this && not like all the rest poems of heartache you did an amazing job like i have said. i loved it. && i enjoyed reading it.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

It has an interesting cadence when i was reading it, im not sure if that was just how i read it or how it actually flows but good job. keep up the work if i have time ill look at some more of your stuff.

Awwwwwww...thts all i can sa 4 some reason..but i liked it alot..a 5/5 for me..