Comments : The Obsession 2

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Talent a plenty, I'll quickly go back and read your others, Elise

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Interesting story indeed,Such mysteries engraved on the poem..
    Good WOrk!

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Beautuful!
    i like it like ur other one! i hope u right more like this!

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Okay.

    Part one -
    Amazng, great flow, wonderful structure, and wording. I loved it and every single part of that poem. It was a delight to read, and it was amazingly written.

    Part 2 -
    WOWWOWWOW!!!
    That's like all I can think of?
    I have nothing no words.
    No thoughts nothing in my head, that will be genrated for my fingers to type.
    Accept "WOWWOWWOW!!" That's all I can think of for this amazing poem. Parts one and two so perfect. Loved them.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    I can't comment on this. I am completely speechless.This was amazing. I absolutely loved it. all I can say is wow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Lol this one leaves me speachless!!!! good poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Nicely done again. You had some good imagery in this piece. & I liked that alot. Keep up the good work!!

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    What a strong poem.
    I am full of questions.
    Very well written.
    ..xx

  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    This is amazing...i'm speechless. this is amazing, like i said already.
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by shay

    Great poemyou got there.keepupthe excellentworklove it,*shay*