Comments : My best friend! (Laura guess what it is!)

  • 17 years ago

    by Audrey

    This was supposed to be humorous right?

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Aww..that's really sweet that you made a poem for your best friend:)
    I did like it, its just the "dog poo and dog meat" part kind of lowered it in quality, but its fine, its your poem:)
    Hmm..the flow was good and i hope you guys stay friends forever..you sound like really good friends:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    That is very well written and great emotions showed, great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This is nicely written. I liked the emotion, depth, and heart you put to it. Nice work, truly.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwwww...thts sooo sweet!! i liked it..a 5/5 for me

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I agree with all the other comments regarding dog poo/meat but i also would like to tell u that in the end its your feelings and whatever comes right from heart is what counts, i really liked the strength of ur relation...very +ive indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by lauracampbell

    I knew i shud of commented early lol ppl bet me to it :( but wot can i say, am a procrastinator :p

    wen i first read tht poem i started crying awwww bless me! omg esther ya tottaly rock!!!! luv ya!

  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    Ah this is so sweet..i love writing poems for my friends. this made me smile...it was kinda funny
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I can relate to this with my bf it is really cool xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    The intentions of the poem are great, I'm glad that you feel this way about your best friend. But, The poem needs alot of work. The flow and rhyme scheme are really off. "My best-est friend ever is girl" This line doesn't work... The grammer doesn't make any sense-- I would suggest re-writing it. The use of the words: dog poo and dog meat makes the poem sound childish.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Haha, this made me giggle at times.
    I thought this was really sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Beautiful. I got a laugh outa that. And I totally see your point. It's good to have such a good friend.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    This is very cute, and funny! nicely written!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Very well written peice filled with emotions..kp up the good job!...cute write!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Oh how sweet. She's very lucky to be your best friend XD

  • 14 years ago

    by Esther

    This poem was meant to make a point, and I agree dog meat and dog poo, is a bit childish but I couldn't think of anything better. It was meant to be good humoured but also have a point to it.