Very interesting write, and thought provoking.
Good Work!

God Bless!

Awh, that was pretty good.. The flow was a little off and your descriptions could do with a little work but it wasnt bad.. Nicely done 4/5

I think it is kind've short but I still like it, sometimes short poems mean the most!

-Thanks for your c/r
-Josiah

Not bad but could be better I dont reall know the whole concept of this poem

I thought it was good. The flow was a bit off, and it could've been expressed more. I thought this could've been more of a quote than a poem. Just my point of view. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

This poem sees more like a collection of random thoughts not strung together properly to form a poem. It does lack a solid center where every line makes sense. Especially your final lines.

Lovely written!
short nice!
straight to the point!
Flow was good!
Keep it up!

Nicely done.. I liked it! Good work.