I equals "U"

by The Poetic Child   Sep 20, 2006


Emptiness begins to be filled with desire,
Happiness begins to raise..higher and higher
Frowns becoming smiles, from thoughts of you
For every little ounce of Happiness you put me through

esteem being raised to a place Ive dreamed of being
and when everything seems to be wrong, you give me believing,
to believe I have the ability to look so good,
when through all the pain...you truly understood

you've had a rough childhood I had one too,
Such characteristics in common, I equals "U"
Sharing personal lifestyles, with you theres trust
and just maybe even a feeling, this love won't rust

Coming from a past of just always being in pain
you showed me the light through the storm and rain
Even if you don't think you really did..you did
You saw me as a Individual not someone stupid

and just for that..I love you for it all,
cause when you see me hurt, you catch me from my fall
Even if I need your mom for this permission,
As long as I'm officially yours..I've completed my mission

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  • 15 years ago

    by Robin Auger

    I absolutely loved this poem. it flowed perfectly and i especially like the first stanza, it stood out the most! great poem. I have a book I am collecting at home of poems, I'm adding this one. Don't worry, its just for my own personal collection. I loved this one! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    The last line *ive completeed my mission* thats so cookl be in a nother poem u said *its a guys mission* and i lvoe how allru sdtories tell ur life its amamzing. thats a true writer. awesome jobbb dave.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Mitsuki

    REALLY REALLY NICE!!!! i love it 10/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven Odenbreit

    That was a really good love poem. it reminds me of my fiance, and what she means to me. thats all i can say. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Nice rythem you're gettn even better wow.
    okay so read my 4 new ones if u can and comment thxs bud...how r u and ur gf?? holla bac.

    ur friend
    lissa