Awww thats so sweet! everything was GOOD! the rhyme...the flow...everything! I liked the last stanza a lot..it really stood out to me..an like everyone else im glad that its not a sad poem anymore! im happy! lol
Just take Care
And
Keep Smiling

All the best
*- Tormented

N yeh still not the first one to comment...ahhhhhh!!!

Aww so sweet i love it!! :D keep it up.
-xXx-

Awwww...thats sooo cute....lol...you wrote about my mom....lol..thats hilarious...k.u.t.g.w...(its not that hard..you can do it)....ttyl!
shwuv ya papi!!!

Nice rythem you're gettn even better wow.
okay so read my 4 new ones if u can and comment thxs bud...how r u and ur gf?? holla bac.

ur friend
lissa

That was a really good love poem. it reminds me of my fiance, and what she means to me. thats all i can say. 5/5

REALLY REALLY NICE!!!! i love it 10/5

The last line *ive completeed my mission* thats so cookl be in a nother poem u said *its a guys mission* and i lvoe how allru sdtories tell ur life its amamzing. thats a true writer. awesome jobbb dave.

lissa

I absolutely loved this poem. it flowed perfectly and i especially like the first stanza, it stood out the most! great poem. I have a book I am collecting at home of poems, I'm adding this one. Don't worry, its just for my own personal collection. I loved this one! 5/5