Not 2 bad , very good 5/5

The first two lines of the poem was enough to take me into the poem, very emotional and very greatly written, this poem dont deserve anything less than a 5/5

Great job.... your poem is great and also flow is really great thanks 5/5

Never thinking that one day you would be gone

[This line might work better if you replaced "thinking" with "thought".]

You know; The long walks on the beach through the sand

[The only thing I can sugest with this line, is to try and minimise the times you write "the"]

Overall, it was a pretty sad poem. The ending really summed it up, too and brought it all together. Nicely done.

Natalie``

Third poem today that I read that gives a 5/5. I dont have many poems on here right now being a first timer and all. But would love for you to read mine when i have them up.

I feel like im going insane!!! 5/5