Comments : I'll stick with with "we were"

  • 11 years ago

    by JL

    Wow, very powerful. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Is this about who I think it is? If it is, I am sorry (I just found out today), and I wish there was something I could do so you would not feel betrayed. If I am wrong about who this is about then I am sorry I wasted your time, and boy do I feel like an a-hole.
    JL

  • 11 years ago

    by Laura

    Ahwwwwwwww Chells this was such a sad poem. It was well writtrn and had an awesome flow. Filled with raw emotion that created a aura of sadness.
    Send me a message if ya need o talk.

  • 11 years ago

    by AshLetitia

    You are talented

  • 11 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I really felt what you were saying. When i can connect with a poem, and what feeling and effect the writer is trying to convey then you sure as hell get a thumbs up from me :] We all know friends are quite capable of walking out of our lives, i think its one of the hardest things to accept.

  • 11 years ago

    by steffff

    Very good. it flowed very well.
    5/5 for me. :)

    -joy

  • 11 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Wow- very impressed by this. it's true to the bone and imagry is spot on. 5/5 x

  • 11 years ago

    by steffff

    That was very good. it flowed so well.
    5/5
    :-]

  • 11 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    I love this poem its great

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelsie

    I really like this. Keep it up. Peace && love.

  • 11 years ago

    by Shunna

    I like Ya Poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Morgan

    This is really good. I like the feeling of anger and pain you wrote about. It makes the poem seem more realistic. Keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by JeSSikA

    DAMN i like this poem a lot!!