Hey bethy
thats a beautiful poem babe
is it about who i think its about?
anyways
ill love you forever.
Helena xox

Beautiful work! The rhyme and rhythym are flawless and the emotion that you put into this piece is amazing. I could feel everything that you put into this and it really made the poem; great write. No doubt a 5/5----- Keep it up! =-)

THiS iS BEAUTiFUL! REALLY;; KEEP iT UP!

MAKE-ME-CRY*

Gorgeous poem. Marvelous flow and the rhyming was asbolutely amazing. Its so true, i can completely relate. the one person in my life who means the MOST to me probably hurts me more than anybody else does, also. Great poem, 5/5

I love it

Omfg i love it, it is so f-in true

Omfg i love it, it is so f-in true

Hey bethy,

Fav piece was -

You're my inner strength,
That keeps me staying free.
But you're my inner weakness,
That will always be.
I love you more than life itself,
You keep me staying strong.
But I hate that it came down to this,
You're the reason my life went wrong..

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im not exactly sure who this is about but who ever it is, and if its true, than he is a fool. But great poem and amazing material used.