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by Jessica Sep 22, 2006
Nature, environment /
Slowly spreading embroidered wings
Gently fluttering from flower to flower
With each quiver, a slight breeze it brings
Sparkles fall from each wing creating a shower..
Delicately watching which way she goes
Carefully hiding the damage that was done
Wings still sparkle, but she no longer glows
Her beauty, confidence, and life he left undone..
A beautiful butterfly slowly floats to the ground
Wings lightly slowing down, taking a lengthy doze
The gentle wind and birds cries the only sound
A weakened butterfly slowly dies beneath a rose..
You are talented, i love the last stanza, sad but great way to end it...
I like the metphor but really sad..great poem though 4/5
Omg. This poem is so beautiful... it just flows like water. It was just so... perfect. The whole metaphor, the poem, the words, the syllabication.
It was just perfect. I love the meaning behind it, i just love it all. You deserve a 5.
Woah very descriptive!!! I loved it...It was amazing!!! I think you are an amazing writer for just being my age!! Oh my gosh!