Comments : Happy Birthday, (R.I.P Gran)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    That was a very good poem!
    Nice job!
    (Sleep, pretty lady, you're free from that pain
    As the garden twists, the wind howls your name)
    This line was very well written your a good writter!

    (Check out my poemz if you want, I like to know what people think)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Oh my dear Katie,

    This poem touched me to the deepest of my heart . My gram passed away a little over a year ago and geez it is so hard to go to family functions and stuff and her just......not being there .

    Such a heart-touching piece Katie, My heart is drenched in tears .

    (((HUGS))) FOR YOU SWEET GIRL .
    Much love, my friend

  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    Wow great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is a beautiful poem katie, it touched my heart truly and deeply
    your grandmother is smiling down on you and showing off about what an amazing poet you are!
    5/5 take care xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Hi Katie.
    I can really relate to this. My nan passed away two months ago, not even that yet and with Mothers day coming up tomorrow, things are hard
    You're poem gave me a new strength.
    If you can face difficult days like that, so can i
    Thank you for writing this
    5/5
    *gem*