Oh a very sad one i must say,i like the way you have used an envelope that make readers to wonder. as always it was a strong poem by a great poet that deserve a 5/5 from me.

Very intense. Your idea was well thought out. Very well written. I love the last stanza most. Another excellent poem. Keep it up, and i'll keep reading. =] 5/5

Wow..Jessy this is amazing. I enjoyed it. I thought it was very detailed, and I got what you where writting about, it was sad aswell. All the emotions where so raw and fresh.. Great work.

Jesse, what a beautiful sad penned your potray here! simply but well express emotions, well done!

It wasn't much a sad poem as it was a short story in a way. I did like the idea about the secrets being in an unread letter, kind of how we keep secrets inside we wish to share but do not feel safe to.

This was a trully sad poem. The story had such an impact on me. Secrets are a bad thing to keep. The flow and rhythm was flawless, and the imagery great. Well done.

Thanks for entering my contest.

This is so sadddd i began to cry when i read it This poem is very well written