This poem reads really good, the rhyming is great, A very sad message,but excellently written.

I really loved this poem. Its beautiful and sends a great message, anorexia is hard to deal with, my friend used to be anorexic. I hope people read this and it inspires them as well. Beautifully written. way over a simple 5.

Very poigniant and well written. keep up the good work doll!

Hi!.. thank you for your advice about my poem..i see what you mean.. but im just not good at writing really-but i needed some how to get it all out ..

>>but yours is amazing! i really really liked it- the flow, the word choice.. way better than just a 5. great job!

Sad yet beautiful words 5/5