Wow. This one is amazing. The emotion, flow, depth, insight.. all were very well written into the poem. Nicely done.. -Jennifer.

This was just. Amazing it was so well written and very beautiful. I enjoyed it. I thought you got what you where talking about across very clearly.

This is such an excellent piece of work, I love it! You are definitely talented, I've added you to my favorites list. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems! :)

"But I believe where there is life there is hope"
I couldn't have said it better.

"Nature is not always merciful, gentle or kind
Human nature without guidance is often blind"
Very True

Great job. You always have a way with words. It'll take me awhile to be at your level^-^.

Magnifent work as always.
Youre a true poet.

God Bless!

Very interestin write, writing with beautiful penned yet very inspirations!

This is an amazing poem, i enjoyed this alot. i love the concept of this poem. Its like whatever you do wrong god is there to show you the way you should be taking && nature is gods way to show you what is good && what is bad. i believe that's what it's saying well to me it does.

again amazing job && your very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

This is another great poem, what I see in your poems are a lesson, each time I read one of your poem I learn a new lesson, great job like always. 5/5 from me.

***speechless WOW! Beautiful rhyme, amazing flow, but what I loved most is how well you brought reality, emotions, and description into this poem....Bravo! Definite 5/5

Amazing. it flowed so well. i liked how it had a little lesson to it. 5/5

Wow. amazing poem!
It flowed perfectly and the rhyming was floorless!
Keep up the amazing work!
5/5 from me

~Murder.

Very Very Very good 5/5

My gosh this piece is stunning. It does flow and rhyme effortlessly, the word choice leaves an impact and the way your voice shines through is a nice touch. Excellent piece

I love this!

---I've been where there are dealers and thugs
I've seen people give away their soul for drugs
Give up their dignity for one serving of dope
But I believe where there is life there is hope---

That is my favorite part! Saying that there is so much lost in humanity, but there is always hope! I love how you made the bad things look like they can get overcome by the greater thing in life, the Lord! I have many poems about the Guy upstairs! He has helped me out of more than what I give Him credit for! Great job 5/5

*~BrittBratt~*

You are a fabulous writer :)