Comments : The Ultimate Sin (Re: Suicide)

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Someone else always has something worse to go through

    ^ let me tell you something about this sentence here Eirisa, if I were to die the second after I comment you this, this is the one thing I will always remember you saying to me....Yes I've heard that before from other people, but you've said that so much to me that it has sunk in and now I am saying that to other people. Now I am the opptomistic one and I am forever grateful that you just penetrated that into my mind!

    I felt like I was sitting in Church on a Sunday morning when reading this because like my pastor does sometimes, it felt like you were writing this, yet speaking directly to me as well, especially that first part after the week I've been through...I really enjoyed this write from you Eirisa and I agree with you so much on everything you've said! I notice I write huuuge comments to you, but I am SOOOOO excited to see you writing and posting new things..tis true when I say your my favorite poet and it makes me happy to read your stuff again :-)
    Thanks for this write, your bound to open some peoples eyes with this one!
    Love you,
    Chell

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Eirisa,
    i havent read your poem for a long, how are you?

    this was absolutely beautiful poem you penned here, not only creative but also unique. not only speak the truth, but also great message..... well inspiring dear...thanks for sharing with your beautiful penned, take care,... bert ~

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Erisa I only wish that I could reach out and hug you for delivering such an incredibly soul touching poem .

    There's no need to give up on the here and the now
    God is watching you closely it'll all work out some how
    ^^
    Beautiful words of truth !

    Cause no matter how bad you believe things may be for you
    Someone else always has something worse to go through
    ^^
    This is so incredibly true Risa . On the days I feel sluggish, sick and weak I remind myself that there are so many others that have it much worse than I . And that gives me the strength to get my butt moving .
    Your words have moved me . Wonderfully written poem with so much meaning .
    Thank-you for sharing Risa !

  • 11 years ago

    by katie!

    That was incredibly beautiful, although I have no religious beleifs, I thought the meaning and the strength of this poem was wonderful, It also gave me an insight into your beliefs, which I always find interesting...

    If only all those people could understand what you put across so well in this poem..

    "Someone else always has something worse to go through"

    That line is incredibly true and bold..

    Well done on such a wonderful poem..

    And cheers for the comment on my latest...
    Unfortuneately silly poems and quotes wouldnt let it be in misscelaneous because it has the word "perverse" it would only accept explicit!

    Well done once again, a truly inspirational write.

    Katie!
    xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Gem

    "Refusing to battle on, selfishly you give up
    Watching your storm brew in your little tea cup"

    That couplet is amazing. It's so true for a lot of people, sometimes giving up seems to be the only option but in the long run, thats the worst decision anyone can make..
    That point came across perfectly in this piece..
    Well done m'dear.. this poem is a diamond.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Riffy

    WOW!
    That is such a moving poem! I absolutely love the message you're putting accross, and its so uplifting. You manage to write about suicide in a very unique way and not in the cliched style I tend to find in this site.

    "So count your blessings and graciously hold them near
    For God has a reason for us all to be here"
    Those few words have so much reason and meaning behind them.

    I can only thank you for writing this piece, it's simply amazing.

    xxx.