Comments : Exhausted

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Shaima22222222!!!!!!
    this is really gggggggggrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeaaaaaaaatttttttt! LoL
    la bgad this is absolutely fantastic...you know I love your poems SO SO much
    sorry its been kinda late...kol sana wenty tayebaaaa! yarab t2ady the most wonderful Eid ;)

    keep that up sweetie
    G'luck
    Your sister
    NemO xxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Good choice of words, really emotional. Great work.

  • 15 years ago

    by mohamed

    The words used here is superb. 5/5

  • Very very beautiful i loved it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Great write..

    "It shows me the shaded life of solitude
    to cut my heart while I am just mute
    I feel only screams and struggles inside
    my innocent face finally turned into wild"

    ^^so much emotions are hidden in those words..

    "My eyes of bloody tears scream
    like an elder river hardly stream
    just exhausted like no time before
    I fall and can't see the light anymore"

    ^^again beautifully expressed.. very powerful write..

    Excellent..

  • 15 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    Nice!

  • 15 years ago

    by 3sA SaNcHa

    Good job...this is so 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh my god
    The best poem I ever came across of. I truly admire you for this great job

  • 15 years ago

    by adroit

    What a ravishing, wonderful, yet sorrowfully sad poem. Keep up the good work. Honest Luck

    Sarah

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude very powerful in the heart love this poem (^_^) 10 /5 you really have a wonderful talent (^_^)

  • 15 years ago

    by NoUr

    Gr8 work expressing ur feelings..i totally felt u that i got a little exhausted at the end :D..ofcourse keep writng..and keep it up!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Paul London

    Excellent work. I loved the poingancy of it. You made your point and great use of metaphors. I am waiting on another collaboration from you and T J. I want to read part two of "Our Dark Ecstasy" LOL keep up the good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    This poem is really deep. It has a lot of meaning, and great feeling. It's great. =]

    And thanks for the comment.

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow this was so deep and like all of your poems so uniquely beautiful and powerful. there is never a time that i have read your poems and have not been left speechless by the amazing impact!!! i loved it, keep up the beautiful work!!!