Omg, you girls write so well. This poem was simply amazing. I'm lost for words.. All I can say is very well done. I wouldn't change a thing. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD...that story was amazing....kept me thinkin then ended with such a bang....wonderful writing I love when poems tell stories

What a great job

Holy hot dang, what a surprising twist at the end of this piece . I was thinking the whole way through that she was cheating and them WHAM what a wake up I got .
I was wondering in certain lines where it said

She thought it would be a better surprise and She had a smile on her face when she typed

I was thinking to myself " what a selfish, uncompassionate little BIATCH, this girl is ........lol

Geez I guess it is so true that we should seek the truth before making an assumption .
A new motto to live by......
Great write girls !
My favorte P&Q duo.......whooohoooo

Awwwww :(!! that was so sad, the ending was really unexpected. I really liked the suspense and how the poem flowed so well. Nicely done!

Omigosh how sad!!!!! The ending gave a suprise twist and it was a very well writen poem!!
*10/5*

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I am sorry, but I think I may have to disagree...I think the poem was beautifully written, but...the storyline was kind of odd and a little on the unrealistic side. What husband would automatically just kill his wife with just and assumption? Most people would confront the spouse, or dig for genuine proof to find out the real truth. I don't know, maybe it was just me though, but like I said, it was beautifully written, just maybe a little unrealistic, unless you just wanted him to sound like a psychopath. Other then that, great job :-)

This is so sad!
keep up the good writing
good job

This is sooo sad! :[
But so good! :D
You did an awsome job.
keep up the good work!
:)

Hey girls,
i really like that poem.. everybody gets a suprise ending and the poem just flows really well.. good work
Talk Soon
**Em**

Very well written. luv it
5/5

keep it up

take care

Whoa, good work...very deep.

That is extremely sad. I started crying. Amazing poem but very very sad. Love your work, you really make emotion come to life

That was terribly sad and twisted and tangled, an incredible write! loaded with emotions!
Charisma*