I loved this poem.. WOW.. excellent work hun.. well done 5/5 xx

Thanks for Your concerns btw.. everything will be ok though.. just going through a bad patch right now.. That's life though lol xx

Great poem-hold your head up!

My god, this is utterly amazing, imma hafta really say this is prolly the best ive read around here so far...it helps alot
good job and keep on writing

Thats a really nice poem! the flw was awsome, and the way you repeat your words made the poem very good!

keep up the hard work

Lovely penned, flowed with beautiful written, well done!

Email me itll be easier... nope he took a new job far away! xhx

I too turn some poems into songs or vice versa. I really enjoyed this piece! Great Job! Jpoet*

I bet this will win in my contest too! thankz for participating!

You won 1st place!!!!!!!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!! thankz for participating in my contest! this is a truly great song/poem! it has a lot of great descriptions!

Lol thankz for the comment! i'm trying to do the poem but i'm kinda busy and i need to submit other poems. lol. so i don't know when i'll finish. he he he

Wow!! this is my favorite poem yet!! I love this poem a lot and I can relate so very well.. keep it up and you will go far!!

Really good song...keep it up!

OH MY GOSH
I frikken adore this!!
This was so beautfully written.
Oh my..I'm in awe..words can not describe how much I love this.
All I can say is excellent!!