K...so I'm not into cuss words, but the poem was amazing! I have one similar called This World...but it's not as long or into detail as this!
Charisma*

Wow this poem is amazing. The flow and structure are suberb. You really have a great piece of work here.

The way you wrote this was simple, yet not. its how i look at everday, at my self in a way. wonderful. i am going to read more of your work. keep writting...

A very poignant write, everyone should be made to read this.