Slowly Losing Heat

by Jessica   Sep 25, 2006


Tears spilling silently down my face
Despairing lips remain sadly shut
Eyes helplessly staring into space
An empty feeling lingers in my gut..

Feeling my body slowly lose heat
From my face, all color slowly drains
Without you here, I am incomplete
With you, I feel as if I am in chains..

Heavens above me open their gates
From them, fall tiny droplets of pain
Heart already gone, my soul it awaits
My mind is lost, it went slowly insane..

Indescribable love runs through my veins
Pumping throughout my body and soul
That tiny sparkle from him, still remains
Without him, I know I will never be whole..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem as always, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Awwww..... i can relate to this sadly.
    Great use of vocab and the flow was flawless yet again.

    I Really hope this isnt true hun. if u wanna tlk pm me kk!

    ~Murder.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awh, wow, Jessy! This was so sad hun. I hope everything is alright! You know I'm here if you need me, kay?

    The poem was amazing though. Flow was flawless, rhyming wasn't forced, vocab was excellent. A very good job overall. Keep it up hun! Ily. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww i know how you feel. this is soo good. its sad. i hate guys they dont care about anything but themselves. ugh. but amazing poem. keep writing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwwwwww Jesssy. I can definitely relate to this. A LOT. i loved it. it made me teary eyed though b/c it took me back to past experiences. but i loved it. this was just amazing. gosh your just great. i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu =D

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