Comments : Slowly Losing Heat

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh my god, i love it. very moving.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Omg, wow. This is amazing. I really like this poem, I thought your detail was great, and it was short, but very very sweet. ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Beauty in ur poems brings out what people feel in words great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Maiya

    What a well written poem sweetheart! This is just so well written & has so much feeling I love it, amazn! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    I have to give this another comment cause i read it again and i loved it even more great job!!!! lol i love ur poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwwwwww Jesssy. I can definitely relate to this. A LOT. i loved it. it made me teary eyed though b/c it took me back to past experiences. but i loved it. this was just amazing. gosh your just great. i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu =D

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww i know how you feel. this is soo good. its sad. i hate guys they dont care about anything but themselves. ugh. but amazing poem. keep writing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awh, wow, Jessy! This was so sad hun. I hope everything is alright! You know I'm here if you need me, kay?

    The poem was amazing though. Flow was flawless, rhyming wasn't forced, vocab was excellent. A very good job overall. Keep it up hun! Ily. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Awwww..... i can relate to this sadly.
    Great use of vocab and the flow was flawless yet again.

    I Really hope this isnt true hun. if u wanna tlk pm me kk!

    ~Murder.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem as always, 5/5