A Story of True Love

by Darien   Sep 28, 2006


A Story of True Love

Darkness crawls in as the stars drift into a sea of black
The moon peaks out from over the horizon in full view
An unforgettable night brewing in the eyes of lovers
Passion grows into the truest kind of love around

Lying on grass, star gazing in an open field together
Bonded by their hands, eyes, lips and legs entangled
Even time itself has stopped to smile at these lovers
Dreaming in the world of reality with eyes wide open

Young at heart, strong in spirit and pure in mind
Romance revived within the flames like a Phoenix
Lips grazing one another leaving a feeling of warmth
True love beacons in their hearts as skin meets skin

Silence fell but broken as their hearts begin to race
Pounding and throbbing from the growing passion
Smiles and laughter, a feeling of overwhelming joy
Uncontrolled hormones begin to take over their body

They pause for a few seconds to catch their breath
Gazing into each other's eyes they see stars shining
God had eased their hearts and gifted them with love
A boy finding a girl and true love binds their souls forever

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought some of the love poems you have done in the past were better, but I still enjoyed this one.
    I loved the imagery and the wording was amazing.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    I love the poem. One of the best I've seen so far. You have a very good way of capturing emotion. Congrats.

  • Great use of words, and again i loved it.... keep up the work

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Omg such a great use of words! this was so powerful. it was really good. good job on it =] xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, ok I loved it, felt it wasn't one of your best love poems, for you are really good at love poems, but I don't know something lacked from this one that a lot of your others don't.

    The Flow and the structure was good. Not really any rhyming going on, but you deffenitly know how to make a poem work without having any. Great work here, keep it up.

    Ciao, Joe