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by christine m
Lots of pain in that poem- well at least thats what i got... i liked it... i dont believe in God, but i understand how it feels for people to be negative about your reason for living
Oh my...lisa dear...another beautiful penned you try to potray here, simply beautiufl yet great meaning...i hope you have a great day! take care... bert ~
Wow! i reallly enjoyed this. i can see someone performing it as spoken poetry. its well written and organized. the statement of those words and later that line, I, for one. incredible. great job!
it's so powerful..it's great
good work keep it up :D
How true these words are. Great job on this write.
For the faith we hold so dear promotes
That He will unite our hearts with love
And that only by His grace
Will our once enemies becomes our brothers.
We must always believe this.
Take care Cindy
This is absolutely beautiful, and holds so much stinging truth in it's words. A ton of meaning, in a artistic rhythm. I loved it! You made several smart, and real points in here. Well worth reading.