Aphrodite's Kiss (Tectractys)

by Bryan   Oct 1, 2006


Her
smile is
sweeter than
Aphrodite's
kiss, moments with her I forever miss.
At these times I feel I will lose my mind,
then it hits me
that I have
been so
blind.
After
all this
time I can
only guarantee,
that my love for her is sweeter than any.
Aphrodite's kiss can never compare,
to the angels
love that I
always
share.

written for a contest.

Tectractys is a style that is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10.

double Tectractys is 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1.

a triple 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10

and so on...

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    I love this! you're realy talented! i love it!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I loved the poem. structure words the whole shibang.

    keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Oh! wow, this was beautiful. The style was definately that of something I've never seen before, but it definately made the poem that much more interesting. It was wonderfully worded, and an another brilliant poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really really like this. I thought that it was very good and you did an amazing job describing your love for her.. it was a very creative way to describe it, which made the poem even better. I think that you did an amazing job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    That was beautiful. This is a very interesting style, and I have to admit it's not one of my favourites, but you handled it well. Always capitalize your 'I's. =]

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