Comments : Solitary Suffering

  • 17 years ago

    by Robiie

    I have tears in my eyes, that was beautiful, really well written and the emotion behind it, someone who can write as beautiful as you could never be alone in this world

    take care sweetie x0x0

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I loved your poem. It's so sad, and the worst thing is that I know what you're talking about. You described the feeling perfectly, and beautifully.

    I don't know how you did it but you really expressed pure sadness, maybe I felt it that way, because it's how I really feel.

    This was my favorite part:

    My time was wasted by loving,
    And never being loved in return.

    Great job!

    Keep writing 5/5

    XoXo
    Gaby