Wow.. This poem was absolutely amazing. I think I sat here and read it over and over about three times. You had such great imagery in this and you chose your words very well. The flow of this was perfect. And the poem in itself gave me chills. Very beautifully written. 5/5

The vocab that was used was very well chosen and added to the overall effect you were trying to establish. The flow was right on and I didn't once stumble over your words. It wasn't creepy enough that I would have refused to read it but at the same time haunting enough to know that people feel that way. Diamonds? A unique description.

This dark poem seems to convey a feeling that none knows the true value and worth of the author . The ending suggest one must risk there teasured secrets in order to be appreciated.. I get the sense even if my iterpretation is wrong this poem is very profound

Wow, that was fcuking amazing! You have such a talent here. Your descriptions were just breath taking. Keep it up. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

I dont have anything to say it was beautiful it was so good that i cant think of any words lovely good job 5/5

Ooooh. The title sounds sooo pretty, and then it turns into a dark raunchy poem. ;P THAT was awesome! ..The title actually reminds me of that song that Lisa girl sung on Australian Idol. ;P I hope she wins. Haha!

Anywhooo. The poem was written awesomely!! Lovely flow. Your word usuage has improved so much since you've came back from your holiday you took awhile ago. It's great. I don't think there's anything wrong with this, I loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Woah, that's just amazing. How you used diamonds in this is clever. I have never read anything like this, it's good to come across different poems about a spread of subjects. I truely enjoyed this poem for its excellent use of words and such strong emotion. You did an excellent job. Keep up the great work, you have a lot of talent! =] 5/5 Definately!

Wow, very powerful and enchanting poem. Just one thing:
"destroying all there" This doesn't seem to make sense to me

Keep it up

"Pressing lips tightly shut, remaining teary eyed"
I like this line.it has so much emotions on it, along with the good flow and thought of the poem
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This was an excellent write. It was deep and very descriptive. I loved the first stanza, I find myself feeling exactly like this sometimes:

Slowly breathing in, struggling to relax
Fidgeting uncomfortably, crying within
The happiness removed like hairs by wax
Evil crawling quickly beneath tender skin

You really hit the nail on the head with that stanza. I really enjoy reading your work. Thank you for placing it here for me to view. Keep up the great work!5/5

Letty

There were several lines where you had a few too many syllables, which would have gotten you a 3, but you had a very strong theme, so you got a 4 instead. Very good work, keep at it!

This is a very beautiful poem

"Exhaustedly releasing the pressure, letting you in.."

That has got to be my favorite line in the poem. The flow was great, and the poem gave me chills as I read it. The feeling I got after reading this poem was kinda eerie...but that's a good thing! Keep up the great work!

~Sydney~

Silently cut by thousands of diamonds inside

^^^^^
i LOVED this line!
yet another brilliant poem from you! great job!

5/5

~Murder.

Amazing peace of poem!
you got the talent... leaves me here speachless!!!

Maybe it's just because I just read HBP, but when I read "Greasy tears flowing from roots of black hair" my first thought was, Severus?

Brillent poeming, powerful and deep.
Pls comment on mine thanks