Bleeding Heart

by Kyra   Oct 3, 2006


A little stream of blood
Runs down my bashed up face
I feel dizzy now
And fall down in my place

When I awake I get back up
Then I look around
Theres a pool of blood
Where Ive been on the ground

You did this to me
You knocked me down
And left me on the cold hard ground

I try to run but you appear
And drag me back by my hair
I try to kick and scream and shout
But it doesn't work you just knock me about

You throw me at the wall and I hit the ground
I want to get up but I stay down
You laugh and start toward me
I wish to myself that you couldn't see

When your near you apologize
And fake tears run from your eyes
You hold out your arms for a hug
I think to myself 'your such a thug'

As we embrace you pin me down
Once again I'm on the ground
I told you no once and I told you again
I had to stop the hurt and pain

I pulled the trigger in self defense
Then left you there stiff and tense
I didn't kill you out of hate
But I couldn't let you commit rape

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Ok.. kyra.. let me tell you that.. all your poems.. contain that kind of feel to it that when.. read aloud.. consumes you and you cant pull away.. ;o
    your wording is amazing,finely penned.
    you've done a bloody well job in painting the picture in this one., very well expressed.

    ..a haunting picture..
    so astonishing.

    great work

    ~Wake~

  • Hey, amazing poem, so sad.
    Well written, great job on flow and metre, its almost perfect. i think you might need to put this in explicit/rape poems though.
    5/5
    Love Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Shinae

    I really liked this one. It made me question whether something like this has really happened to you, or whether this is sort of a Hollywood scenario. But either way, it was a good read and had good flow. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by NEZ D O DOUBLE G

    This is cool i like it it has blood in it its my kinda style you should comment on mine 2 well good job

    **NESSA**