This is cool i like it it has blood in it its my kinda style you should comment on mine 2 well good job

**NESSA**

I really liked this one. It made me question whether something like this has really happened to you, or whether this is sort of a Hollywood scenario. But either way, it was a good read and had good flow. Keep it up!

Hey, amazing poem, so sad.
Well written, great job on flow and metre, its almost perfect. i think you might need to put this in explicit/rape poems though.
5/5
Love Mel

Ok.. kyra.. let me tell you that.. all your poems.. contain that kind of feel to it that when.. read aloud.. consumes you and you cant pull away.. ;o
your wording is amazing,finely penned.
you've done a bloody well job in painting the picture in this one., very well expressed.

..a haunting picture..
so astonishing.

great work

~Wake~