Comments : I Don't Remember When

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    "If he would just hold my hand
    and tell me
    He loves me again"
    These lines sums up the thought of the poem, which is a yearning Love.
    It has also some twist of thought/story in some lines.
    Great writing.

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Such a sad write. how we all wish to remember the good times and live in the essence of them.

    Great job. Good flow and such a heartfelt message

    Happiness
    Jeannie