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This is really nicely done Nick, i like it.. and is true. we will all understand one day... everything happens for a reason,
we just dont know it yet..
by Beauty In The Breaking
Wonderful again Nick! ^.^ 5/5
Very good and very true. You write so beautifully and have such great talent for expressing the feeling behind each of your poems that it just blows me away.
I'm looking forward to reading more of yours in the future and thanks for all the comments and votes! They mean a lot to me :)
So Hawkeye I see your name is Nick ,I love the last stanza of this poem ,very thought provoking,thank you again for commenting all my poems ,it was great to see all those red numbers, you are very talented I will add you to my favs.
There pleads = their pleads
flys = flew(?)Your random comma's in the lines are very frustrating. I don't really understand this poem, but it was slightly captivating. Well done, still, but I don't have that much to say about this one...
That is a very good poem 5/5