A complicated poem... The punctuation is off. Where some periods are there should be question marks, etc... I am not really sure If I quite found a flow in this poem... although I know that there must be one. I must reread this poem. I'm still trying to figure out what the meaning is.
Overall, the meaning was well put, and although the overall meaning was cliche, the way you put it into words WAS unique.
"Do you think of nature, its soft sounds and beauty
Do you think of life, how it came and how it will go
Do you think of love, it's warming touch to one's heart
Or do you think, of yourself as time goes by for eternity."
For your age you write amazingly. This was a really touching and poignant write. Great job
It was so real and touching...you explained the images of life so well my lil bro
And you write further away from your age..And it's so cool
I was writing 'Roses are red....' kind of things when I was at your age :)
Keep it up,