I liked this poem...very deep and heartfelt..I can relate to it completely. This write was lovely though, the stanzas and the flow, excellent. 5/5.

Te name of this really grabed me i really liked it.... good job
thanx 4 the comment....means alot

This poem i really liked....
i no wat u mean in it...
like ure battling something evil inside u
thank u heaps 4 ure comment
u truly hava talent

Hey,
First of all thanks for your comment, i suffer form bulimia so i know what an eating disorder can do to you, so i'm so glad your friend has you to support her through this! Secoundly this poem was excellent. I really liked the words used. When i first read it, i thought that the third, fourth and all the other stanza#s should of began with "the never ending..." as you used repitition in the first two stanzas. I liked therhyme scheme you had going hear, it's quite effective. many people could probably relate to this peom, and this kept me more intrested in reading it, i was hooked from the start. A great read! keep it up! xx

This is very good. good job. its very deep and easy for people to relate. good work!

I like this it deep i no what ur talking about it just like u no what im talking about and ill give u 5/5 and ill will add u on my fav

You were right I can really relate to this poem.It's great and has excellent flow to it!Thankies for the comment you left me I changed the title to "Giving Up Slowly" if you wanted to know..

Hello, thanks for your comment. You were right i can relate to alot of your poetry! Very nice job