I know how that feeling is. it hurts too much.
Good stuff. :)

A true poem, that shows alot of true emotions,
great work. keep it up

I really like this one, but i dont think its your best.
theres aloth of anger in this, but at the same time it seemed quite sad.

still 5/5

~Murder.

You have just read the heart of over half of the teenager girl population and women for that matter. We don't know why we believe them but we do even when the truth is staring us right in the face. I loved reading this poem. I believe that you also took the words right out of my mouth. This is wonderful. I wish that I could give you a higher vote then a 5 because I believe that this deserves way more. You used a brilliant concept. You took something that happens in everyday life and turned it into a work of art. Great write hun. 5/5

Letty

Awh, that was sad.. Maybe it should go in the explicit section though.. The descriptions were pretty good but I would have liked to see a little more detail in there.. The emotion was clear though and it was quite well written so nice job! 5/5

True i know how you feel!!

One word AH-mazing!

-Mel

Hey. I'm here to do what I said I was going to,and honestly I almost wish I wasn't. The poem itself is really good and I can relate to it more than I want to (which is why it makes it hard to have to read...but I am glad I did.) I'm currently still in love with the one that cheated on me numerous times. And I hope he changes...The beginning of the poem you said 'its funny how things never change' well, I hope that's not my case. But anyway,the point in all this is just to say that you've captured the pain in it really well. Makes me think maybe you've had the same blind love? Or perhaps have? Well anyway, great write. Normally I wouldn't agree with the 'screwing' term you used because it just makes it seem like there was lack of another word, like lack of vocab, but I think it actually showed the naivite of it all, and almost the anger... That's more pain than anger...

Well yeah, great job.

Bummer how you cant put screw huh... anyways..
AMAZING POEM! how can anyone not give you a perfect 5/5? Well your rhyming was amazing and the poem all flowed so smoothly my favorite part is:

I don't know If I can stand
To see you love another girl
You know that you broke my heart
You know that your my world

Again Great Job.
5/5

I`ve felt that way before .
I love this poem .
Awesome .
5/FiVE .
..__MiNDYY

Just a quick comment... "You know that your my world" and "But while your standing by my side" both should be "you're" or "you are". Other then that... good write. Keep up the good work and keep writing. 5/5

Good poem.

~Angel of Secrets~

I love the emotion this poem at i can relate at the same time... wow this great poem for me thanks 5/5

Thats a nice poem!
but sad...
i went through this,,, and in the end... i was free... things seem to be perfect but they arent....

5/5keep it up!

Awwwh this was sad but sweet. well expressed. 5/5

I think this was a nice poem, but i think you resticted it..the title is such a good title..i was like "WOW, that poem sounds like it's going to be sooo good"..and then i saw that the poem wa spretty short and i think if you made it a tad longer and bit more detailed, it would have been way better. But thats just my opinion. Good poem all the same:) Keep up the awesome work

A bit cliche, for me, but the rhyme did not seem too forced and was not too bad over all.. Sorry that I do not have more to say...

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Great poem lots of emotion and depth
5/5
Luv DarkCookie

Hey! Wow!!! Awesome poem....I love it! I can kinda relate to it! Awesome! It's a 5/5 for sure . . .
*Just Lisa*

Wow so so so so amazing ... the word and the way u wrote it so amazing ... really great job .. the poem touch me inside myheart ^.^ ......