Comments : Sleep

  • 17 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    This is really good
    and that is really like me(in a way)

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    Awesome poem. :D

  • 17 years ago

    by christy

    I DID LIKE THIS POEM.SLEEP CAN BE THE ONE TIME WHEN LIFE IS SIMPLE !!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    a beautiful poem but i must say that the flow was sometimes a little off, love the subject, i haven't read much poems about sleep =)
    good work!
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Anna

    I loved this poem haha makes me look forward to my sleep time.. good job i rate it 5

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, great job on this piece. Its got an interesting rhyme scheme and a nice flow. You have penned something simple and odd yet well written. superb piece