Dear Ana, You Destroyed Me.

by ForeverYoung   Oct 8, 2006


Thinking about what you did
How you ripped apart my soul
Now look at me in the casket, Ana
My body so deadly pale and cold

Look at my body now, Ana
Bones stick through my skin
You have finally won the battle
When all I wanted was to be thin

You thought that you owned me
You took control and I admitted defeat
The voices brought with you in my head
Convinced me that Im to fat to eat

I remember when I weighed my self
And I hadnt lost enough weight
I knew I could never eat again
As myself I would bitterly hate

I only wanted to be thin, Ana
But you took control over me
Theyd all say I was to small
But you distorted images Id see

So dear Ana you have killed me
But I got my wish Im finaly thin
So despite what everyone says to you
This battle I did win....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kia

    I have one word to say WOW! this poem is very deep and very emotional. you really were able to connect with the reader and make the story real for them AWESOME JOB

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Such a sad poem, very well written... it's sad that this really does happen. The poem is beautifully written though. You are very talented... 5/5. Keep writing always!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    It was very emotional, very powerful, very sad. I can really relate to it.. *hugs you* Wonderfully writtern. And I was curious if this was about you? Anyhow, keep up the good work. 5/5 definitely.
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    A powerful poem & I'm sure many can relate to the sadness felt within the poem. The flow was flawless, emotions were clear and strong, and the descriptions were vivid.

    "Look at my body now, Ana
    Bones stick through my skin
    You have finally won the battle
    When all I wanted was to be thin

    You thought that you owned me
    You took control and I admitted defeat
    The voices brought with you in my head
    Convinced me that Im to fat to eat"

    ^ My favorite stanzas, you really do have a way with words. Fantastic job, keep writing! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Interesting poem. I think that this "Ana" can be described a bit more and the topic too. Keep it up

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