I love this poem..you did you great job...:) Keep Up With Your Writting..

Its sooo sad :(( but soo wel writen

This was ...WOW. very well written. the rhyming and flow and all were flawless. great job!!
>emily@->-

O.O Wow.... This a VERY sad poem- Honestly I came pretty close to crying.

You got some serious emotion going on. I'm hoping this was fiction, 'Cause iI'd feel weird commenting if it wasnt. =/

I really enjoyed it though. 5/5

Aww this is really sad,and beautifuly written.

Well this almost made me cry......but very good

This poem brought tears to my eyes, it's written amazingly besides for the few spelling mistakes. I loved this poem, it's filled with such saddness, even though you finished off with the girl leaving and taking the long way home. It's still really good. Keep it up 5/5

This is very strong and tells a sad story, I hope those that read this realize, as you have, what drunk driving can do/cause.

You've held the readers attention with this write, it flows well and made for an easy read. Other than for a few spelling errors, I find nothing wrong with it.

Another wonderfully true but sad write!

Awe. this is so sad.
it made me tear up.
youre an amazing writer.
5/5.

Wow this is really really good
I mean it you're poems are very special and i absolutely love your writing style
:) you really make me think about things you normally take for granted ...
Love it
5/5 x x

I think your poems are good and have good meaning to them keep it up

I really like the message you're trying to send through this poem. I think you should always take time to observe the little things because those are the things that usually make your life full.
5/5

I have tears in my eyes...this is a hard subject for me to deal with due to it happened to someone I know a few years back...but nontheless, the message you're conveying through your words is heartfelt and strong...the ending was beautifully wrapped up.

Wow, so sad. I could feel the pain on both of them and I could picture everything thing that you explained. I think that it was a very good poem. I give it a five!

O my gosh sweetie! i freakin love this poem! ESCPECIALLY the end! 5/5... it reminds me of my brother who just passed away a few weeks ago :( is it a true story at all?

Wow im sorry if this happened to me i would feel the exat way

Oh, how sad :[
I loved the story, its so gr8 indeed
although a bit long but worth reading.
I hope everything's okay
keep it up xx

Only one word for this poem and that is

WOW!

incredible! i absolutely loved it, so powerful and heartfelt