Wow... thats all i can say.. haha... well im gona try to put my feelings into words... it was great... the words you used were deep... loved the way you repeated the title... unique... flow and imagery were great... keep writing! love your poems!
Again, wow! The imagery in this poem is amazing, you used the perfect words to describe this story. Very sad. I love how you used the repetition of Desolate Truth in the last line of every stanza, it made it stronger. Great work! =] 5/5
The flow in this poem is notably better than the rest of your poems, though I don't like the word choice very much. I'm also not quite grasping the meaning. I don't think this poem is as good as your others... 4/5.