The flow is flawless in this moving poem

Hey well done! at the start of the poem, i did'nt quite get it but after the first few stanza it all fell into place. Great Ending too!
well done with both your flow, and rhyming, bith are nearly perfect! Love
~She Died Screaming

Amazing... very interesting and it deeply touch my heart very emotional and i can feel the sadness of this poem great job! 5/5

I really liked it you did a good job writing this

Wow amazing job on this poem. it was full with emotion. and i loved the rhyming. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

:( aww this was great!

You will be better of up there"

I think "You will be better ofF up there" has a better ring to it

"You will be better off up there" has a better ring to it

Was amazing ..... so sad .... and bad .. but really geat job ..... keep it up

I'm all choked up... I'm seriously adding you to my favorites. I usually chose which stanza I like the best... but I love them all! Amazing... 5/5

Wow this poem was so emotion it brought tears to my eyes..i can see why it took u a while u obviously put alot of effort into (like ur other poems) Great work
5/5
Luv DarkCookie xoxo

I really luved this poem! ilot of meaning to and emotions! my fovorite was the last stanza:
"He kissed her one last time,
As he stared to cry.
For she was finally gone.
But at least he said goodbye"

It's very beautifuly written yet sad! really enjoyed reading it,,
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

It sent a shiver down my spine.
beautiful

Great Job! this was amazing! it was beautifully sad...it brought tears to my eyes to think that a man that sweet and understanding could lose the love of his life! i love this style of writing and am glad i read this poem....def keep up the good work! id appreciate it if u could comment my poems
andi

That was sooooo, B-E-A-U-TIFUL!!! i almost cried but not quite.......5/5

Man. I am on the verge of tears. Love gets to me. I am making my boyfriend read it right now lol. Wonderful poem. You truley are an artist through poetry. Your hard work paid off. I wish I could give you higher than a 5 but unfortunately I cant. :*( 5/5

Oh... That Is So Sad!!! But Its Really Good Work! I Love It!!! Its Makes Me Want To Cry!

Emily

*5/5*...beautifull...luv it..keep up the good work..i luvit how u have put soo much emotion in it..*5/5*

Wow...no matter what account u have u still amaze me...i like it... lol that one verse where hes whispering in her ear i found that one odd...usually if ur in love u wanna hold their hand forever and hes like...you can let go now...haha...great write!

55555555555/5

Wow that is excellent