HMM;; GOOD POEM GiRL! UMM, GOOD JOB, GOOD RHYMiNG ALL THE WAY THROUGH! && THANKS FOR THE COMMENT!

*GiRL iN LOVE

Hey girl that poem was awsome and yeah take out the last line it'll sound better!

Hey that was so good .. the last stanza is good but yeah doesnt flow amazing though

Ok, I'll take it out, thanks! ;]

Short but exploding with emotion. i loved it and i can tell u have some serious talent. i love the 2nd and 3rd sentence in the second stanza.
very detailed all in all. thx for ur comment,
love ya lots,
sore

Ewww. lol kinda creepy. I like it.

Thanks for comenting my poem. means alot to me. =)

Short but good. I love the last stanza. It has alot of emotion in it. great job!
~Chaos~

Short and unique... i liked it alot, rhyming in every line!! good job!!!

Mm. Amazingg.
You've got some talentt.

Even though it's short, it's still a good poem. Although, i think it would be even better if it had just a few more lines, then it would sound more complete! But either way, it was a good poem! =)

x.xBrokenx.x

This is good. you really have talent. keep it up its amazing work that youve got here.
<3jess

I like the imagery in the 1st stanza, what I also like in this poem is your choice of words, good job and the rhyming is great, well done.

This poem is good..it was written nicely, flowed great,and the rhyming was perfect.. but it seemed like it wasnt finished..it kinda left me hanging..maybe its just me but i was looking for something more.i give you a 4/5 on this one..still nice job.

Wow this poem is deep. I loved it and you did a great job writing this :] 5/5

Wow this is deep
i still love it though
5/5
i sometimes feel this way.

WOW! i really like this poem
its sorta like mine called am i pretty enough yet
i really enjoyed this poem
excellent

A very intense piece. Erupting with emotion and feeling. I enjoyed reading it. Great write.

Best Wishes