Comments : A Beating Heart Part 2 {Quatrain}

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Great poem! yes it is short, but you did a great job on it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Short but sweet! Love it---the only thing that I caught is that "loose" should be "lose"------Other than that, amazing! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Not long but very impressive,,, and for me it express alot! nicely written great job5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Not long but very impressive,,, and for me it express alot! nicely written great job5/5