Comments : Green Eyed Reflection {Monchielle}

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a very good poem very well written and detailed. keep it up xx

  • 11 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    I have said this before and I will say it again...You have such a talent for writing poetry!!!

    Well done and keep it up! I love reading your poems...

    Love

    Lysette x x x

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Well Nat, that poem seemed more like you. It flowed very well and it seemed more relaxed than your other poems. Well done on this one SMAWCE sister, I am proud of you!

  • 11 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Good write, NatterPatter.

    i hope you're doing alright.. you know whenever you need to talk, i'm HERE. never doubt it, hun.

    *hugs tight*

    i miss you.
    keep up the fantastical work.

    E>

  • 11 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. I loved the rhyming scheme and admire the choice of words you used cause I know it would be hard writing everything you want to in just six stanzas, but you did it very well. Great job
    -Shannon♥

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow this poem is really really good. i loved it. it's so deep. it's great nice work shanik

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job. Great topic, perfect last two lines. keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I love the first stanza .
    Yu are one amazing writer .
    I like how yu chose to end the poem.
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 11 years ago

    by isaiah

    U a beast shordy

  • 11 years ago

    by isaiah

    U a beast shordy

  • 11 years ago

    by ether

    Awwh! Nata!! That was so good and sad! I loved the second stanza, it flowed so well. The vocaublary was great and it actually seemed to flow better than your other poems because you used less of the "bigger" words. Great poem, 5/5 Ily

    jess ~

  • 11 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I've never heard of a 'Monchielle' poem before, it's neat though. The repeating line really helps the flow and makes the meaning stronger. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow, that looks like a really hard style to write. But you did it very well. I like the story behind it, and the ending finished it perfectly. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 11 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I've never read this kind of poem before; I love it. Especially because some of the lines rhyme, but it's not over the top---Also, the repitition has a nice effect on the poem---You should write more of these! Love it, hun---5/5