Wow, that's really nice. 5.

It reminds me of one of the ICP songs on The Wrath... I think just cuz of the way it ends... but I really like it.

I wasn't sure about the flow at first, but this poem grew on me as I kept writing. You're very talented! Keep writing!

Always,

Car

Great job anthony. You though it, caught it, and wrote it with this one. Those times when we don't want pitty, just answers. Wishing for that pain to simply vanish. Hidding behind that mask, wanting so deeply for it to be reality.

What a brilliant write ,one I think most people can relate too ,for at some point in all our lifes I suspect everyones put on a mask to hide what they really feel ,I know I have have.Hope your working on more writes as I enjoy reading your work ,best wishes to you and take care.

A beautiful poem.
I think everyone sometimes want to hide behind a mask, so it's reality.
A great piece of writing with a nice flow, well done.

A wonderful poem well expressed...love the flow on it...gave it a 5