Desires

by J Lau   Oct 14, 2006


Dreams and reality collide,
Hope and faith survives.
Desires and fate entangle,
Lust and love entwines.
Vision and goals coincide,
Life and destiny defined.

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There are so many things in life that are out of our control. So many things we desire, yet will not pocess.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    It was short
    but it was good
    and i liked
    the word choice

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Hmm i like this poem...simple but good..seems lik u hav fame in ur poems..mayb this should b ryme..idk y but i think it should...its a 5/5 cuz its simple and basically says everything..

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Short yet simple...well written...very true and the choice of words-Superb!..and the meaning is well portrayed through this good write!
    5/5
    Kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Well penned, powerful and moreover completely true. a poem with great meaning and great vocabulary, excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Short, and straight up. That is so true. I love the style, the message was clear. You did anexcellent job. 5/5

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