Not So Happily Ever After..

by Sophie   Oct 15, 2006


It was love at first sight.
When I met you that day.
Your smile so bright.
It blew me away.

We started hanging out.
Doing what friends do.
I just wanted to shout.
That I was in love with you.

Finally you confessed.
Said that you loved me too.
I became obsessed.
I was devoted to you.

You must of spoken to soon.
Or changed your mind.
The love-song changed tune.
But I was still too blind.

You showed some signs,
Tried to let me know.
A step at a time.
But I wouldn't let go.

You decided not to care.
Got with another girl.
Although I was not there.
You completely broke my world.

I found out so suddenly.
I didn't believe it at first
Of all the ways to break me.
This one was the worst.

You thought I didn't know.
I was clueless in your eyes.
I slapped you and yelled
"You are just like most the guys."

I hope you are happy now.
And very satisfied.
If you haven't found the reason
Then is why I died..

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  • 17 years ago

    by starcrossedlvr

    Dont you just hate boys!!! there are plenty out there who dont have a clue how to treat us but there are those ginuwine guys who treat you better than you can ever treat yourself and yeah guys never notice the girl who loves them with all their heart and who is crying their eyes out...hey u'll find ur guy on day who treats u how u need and deserve to be treated!!!=)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Nice flow and content. Some words could have been a touch better. It was not something that I particularly liked but it was good. Not mind-blowing but nice. The way it unfolded came to a great ending. It was a different perspective on a similar theme. The 7-8 stanzas were my favorites. Something about them stood out to me. It's a cool write.
    ~Faith-less