I really liked this poem !

Kali

I know why you told me to read this. Thank you so much! It makes me stronger knowing there are people who feel the way I do, or at least know the way I feel.

Incredibly poem that i have been able to relate to many times before. Good word use, expressive... may be a finalist!
5/5
♥
~Stephen White

Nice one. Most poetry about such a subject tends to come out as fake...
I like this one

I have ot say i really like this style of poetry you have going hear. It's like a free verse poem but its not.. Anywyas i htink this poem has alot of emotion put into it, i liked the vocabulary youve used. You got my attention and did hold it;

"so depressed
and hollow
numb"

i can kindof relate to that verse maybe thats why i was more into reading it. The description youve used in some places is amazing and it creates a very powewrful image;

"that rips you
to the core"

i really liked that bit of it. And the conclusion "this blackened world" it concluded this poem excellently. But maybe its just me but i thought it belonged morei n the dark section of the site rather then the sad. But still a great read, keep them up! Thank you for your comments. xx

Ah, the relationship between an individual commiting suicide and his "weapon" of choice. How interesting. Yes, suicide does seem a pleading solution at times...but the potential prospects of life seem worthwhile. We only have one chance to live.

Excellent writing.

Honestly?
I found this quite dull.
There was nothing interesting in it.
It's like a sob story.

Definition in Star's mind.
Sob Story: A friend talking about how rocks always gets step on. While, me/you, on the other hand, listen while hating the whole thing.

I don't hate your poem.
I just don't like it.

I'm probably going to give this a 3.
Sorry.
But I won't vote :]
Unless you want me to of course.

You had alot of good images through out this piece I liked it alot the feeling although forboding was clear and haunting all and all it was a good read Plot121