Rejection

by twisted reality   Oct 15, 2006


She's unnoticed in a corner so dark,
All because of those evil remarks.
Tears roll down her face inside,
And that is how she divides.

She lets no one discover,
What really is under,
Those miles and miles,
Of fake little smiles.

She's tired of being rejected,
And always being effected.
Words so harsh by everyone else,
That really weren't all that false.

She finally gave in,
And had already died within.
Because those words were for fun,
Those people finally won.

**Ok, maybe some of you think this should be in the sad poems, but I put it in here. I will always return votes/comments.**

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  • 7 years ago

    by shantavia

    Omg like this is my favorite

  • 9 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this is real sad:[
    but very good writing.
    keep up the good work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked its flow and wording and i don't think it should be in sad poems,it fits here
    Especially i liked those

    She lets no one discover,
    What really is under,
    Those miles and miles,
    Of fake little smiles.

    Good job

    Ps.You're added to my favorites,i liked your style and have been looking for good friends and thought maybe you can be,would you like to be a friend of mine?
    E-mail me to let me know
    Have a nice day
    Your-friend-to-be
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is sad but I can see why you put it under the Life category. I am sure many people can relate to this especially teenagers. It is so hard to be young and teenagers can be so cruel. Thanks for sharing this.Nice job.

  • 10 years ago

    by kelS;

    I hope you don`t mind.. but i am going to put this poem on my nexopia.

    just comment me on the poem "uhm" if you don`t want me to.