Guided by my Angel

by PS   Oct 18, 2006


Angel forsaken in the summer
who is there to guide me now
but summer's safe, warm midnight
spring, tis only a beginning

fall you come with falling leaves
the smell of childhood in the air
in the sky, you are again
my guardian angel you are again

far away, n'er near, watching
feeling emotion as a gaurdian
n'er saying what you feel
but letting me feel as you would

winter bites with every night, the hurt,
the cut, the starry night, cloudless and
there, youre here for me loving
smoothly climbing, descending the sky

when the warmth is farther away
when love hibernates in deep holes
when i need the love, the touch the most
you give to me, all night long

my angel my gaurdian watch over me
make sure i am what im meant to be

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ria

    I like your imagery,but you seem to break the rhyming a lot,in places when I think you should keep it.Just as the pictures charm me, your rhyming and meter(that's what we call it in greek,I don't know if it's the same in english) change and my picture gets blown away.I don't understand why you "cut" the words too,made it hard for me to understand and go on.
    I don't know if it's good to say these stuff,but I hope you see it as my simple opinion.Keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! i loved it! great flow and word usage...well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    Incredible choice of language and imagery I cfelt as though I could have been reading somthing done by the masters of yesterday a very real yet dreamlike quality. I will be back to read more of your work.
    Tim

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    This poem has got a weird vibe for me, don't get me wrong I appreciate and enjoyed reading it thoroughly because of this weird vibe I got. I felt like I was reading something written by a poet a hundred years ago, your use of language, your beautiful choice of words just added to the effect. :o) Great work

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