Resolute Soul

by Natalie   Oct 19, 2006


Bitter nightmares flash back infront of eyes,
Tip of tongue stung 'till poetry could stand,
Untold truth found new ways for expression,
Once pen and paper approached shaky hand.

Resolute soul wiped away languished tears,
Freckled face appeared on rosy red cheeks,
Solitary laughs bursted through clear pride,
Showing emotions, sealing unknown leaks.

Beautiful words transformed upon paper,
Creating rhymes, imagery, flawless flow,
Ball point pen leaked amazing word usage,
For people to learn from, eventually grow.

Cryptic meanings combined with memories,
Determination puts skilled mind to test,
Great thoughts ponder through many pages,
Never ceasing to put pen down for rest.

20th October 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie

_This poem was done for a contest. We had to write about a chosen person. I chose "Roadandtheradio" {AKA Kaylee}.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I found this poem very confusing, but it was still a good read. I love the third stanza, though. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow, a very good write. Your flow was amazing, as well as your vocab. A variety of words always makes a poem sound better, as you just proved. Keep it up. You have amazing talent. =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Great use of words very well written xx

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very well done. YOu really capture the readers attention and put them into the scenery of what you're getting to. You're a very talented writter.
    5/5 Keep up the great work!

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow. I loved your word usage! It was so very well done. And I liked this whole topic a lot. Very unique.

    [Once pen and paper approached shaky hand.]
    ^^I don't know why this seemed to pop out at me the most, but it did. I like the details you went into to describe how it is to write a poem. Well done. =) xoxo

    Samantha

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