Seaweed Entanglement (Collab)

by Angie   Oct 19, 2006


Seaweed Entanglement (Collaboration)
By Angela and Andrea

Come closer my lover
Follow my scented aroma
Allow the tides to swallow
As I wrap my lips around your heart

Let the waves caress us
While my hands devour your soul
Become one with the ocean
As your body floats

Distant thunder crashes
Pupils dance with delight
Seaweed consumes your limbs
Spinning, within the tidal waves of fear

Deeper you sink into the dark salty sea
Your screeching cries no longer heard
Rejuvenated by this entanglement
I swim leisurely toward the sandy shore

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wrap my lips around your heart!

    Omg - that line is amazing and so powerful! I took this to also mean how words can really hit the hard, and capture it.

    This poem is strong and very much to be feared - I would not want to be in the receiving end of this double power lol.

    The imagery was amazing, and the description of the sea. I like the subtle mystery too, we do not know really what has been defeated, but something has been!

    Great collab work you pair!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, Nicely done! ..This was definately a great dark poem/collab. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

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